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hvanderwegen

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    Nothing wrong with the figure, but the composition needs more work in my opinion. Be careful of those visual tangents: they're everywhere.

     

    And the overall composition could use some work. Centered straight standing looks somewhat static. Wrists are cut off by the straight lines of the object in the background. Background lighting and overall lighting could be much more dramatic for visual interest.

     

    I would push the composition much further, because I feel it doesn't do justice to your character and clothing, which are good!

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